Saturday, July 4, 2009

on the path less trodden

making fast n choosing the easy way out,
can never make u best as much as u shout
To be the winner the path to be tread,
Is not as easy as having ur bread.

Following the crowd doesnt give distinction
accepting this fact needs retrospection.
Newton ,Archimedes stud from rest as xceptions
adroits like them therefore won appreciation.

the path u design is for u to pave,
facing boldly the striking waves.
shortcuts are obvious paths for knaves
between the shortcut n real path donot rave.

the obstructions in the way are bent to arrive,
depends on ur willpower how u thrive.
Once u have given upits hard to strive
if ur determined winning is five to five.

9 comments:

  1. A truth written beautifully.....nice poem yaar. Mere baad poem writing me tumhara hi number aata hai. Can i write my poem alo here?

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  2. sure u can write ur poem too here ............are itne ijjatafjai mere dwara shuru kiye is blog ki thanx smrati

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  3. though i have never written a poem and will never be able to write..but have read loads of them..will only say..the theme and the essence is excellent..but the rhyming needs a bit more maturity..

    Thanks.
    Chao,
    Ashu

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  4. thanku ashu wll keep in mind while composing the other one n hope will keep up to ur XPECTATIONS

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  5. Why this xpectations in Capitals..??

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  7. mast poem hai!!!
    par tum itni serious poem kab se likhne lagi!!!
    kuch mazedar likho!!!!

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  8. Hmmm....mai kya likhu in poems k baare me..thoda thoda samaj aaya :)....par i will go with ankita...kuch majedaar likho yaar
    in fact we shud start a thread where ppl can keep on adding lines.....
    Howz d idea???

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  9. gr8 idea as soon as i get a behtarin topic wll go by it sachin

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